1. I have a dream house in my mind, which is located on a beach near the sea .
【高级表达】短语in one's mind意为：在某人想象中，属于高中水平短语。
2. In front of my house , there is a sea in which plenty of animals chose to live .
【高级表达】短语in front of意为：在前面，属于高中水平短语。
3. On the first floor, there're a kitchen, a living room with a big TV and an opened balcony .
【教师点评】主谓一致错误，请检查 there're a kitchen，注意主谓/单复数一致性。
4. In that case, I can cook meals by myself.
【高级表达】短语in that意为：因为，原因在于，属于四六级英语考试常见经典短语。
例2
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1. Everyone wants to have a beautiful house that maybe large , light or clean .
【教师点评】成分缺失错误，请检查 that maybe large，缺少谓语或句式有误。
2. Because a beautiful could bring us good feeling and it could improve our life quality .
【成分缺失】请检查a beautiful could,表达不规范.
【教师点评】从句、连接词错误，请检查Because a beautiful …表达不规范/缺少主句，建议修改断句或修改表达。
3. My dream house will be located on the beach so that when I open the window , I can see the beautiful blue sea and smell the sea wind .
【教师点评】动词错误，请检查，smell the sea wind表达不通顺，建议修改动词或修改表达。
4. There will have many lovely creatures around my house , just like crabs , sea birds .
【中式英语】请检查There will have many lovely, 中式英语,建议改成there be形式.
5. Behind it is a big woods every morning .
【名词单复数错误】请检查big woods,修改单复数或修改表达.
6. I can enjoy the warm sunshine every sunny day , kitchen toilet bedroom is also , as well as balang Enything could bring me the warmth and happiness .
【冠词、限定词错误】请检查toilet bedroom,表达不规范,建议加冠词或修改单词.
【教师点评】句子-句式错误，请检查bedroom is also as well as balcony句型有误/成分缺失。
【其他错误】请检查kitchen、toilet,、bedroom英文标点中无顿号。
7. Everyone has a dream house it react the owner's character and habits .
【主谓一致错误】请检查house it react,表达不规范/前后不通顺.
【教师点评】从句、连接词错误，请检查 a dream house, it react…表达不规范，建议修改断句或修改表达。
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1.Once upon a time when I fell in the story book , which about princess and castle , I had a idea of dreaming be use what I would be in the future .
【冠词、限定词错误】请检查about princess,表达不规范,建议加限定词或修改表达.
【冠词、限定词错误】请检查a idea, 元音发音开头的词前应用an
【教师点评】从句、连接词错误，请检查 dreaming house what I would …表达不通，建议修改断句或修改表达。
2. The dream house of mine would be located in the seaside city .
【短语学习】短语seaside city用的不错
3. Walking along the seaside when I was in sad to touch the wind and night .
【教师点评】句子-句式错误，请检查Walking along the seaside when ...句型有误/主句缺失。
4. If you invited to my house and I couldn't tell you anything about it .
【教师点评】主谓一致错误，请检查you was，注意主谓/单复数一致性。
5. Don't be worry .
【词性错误】请检查be worry,表达不通顺/建议改成形容词形式.
6. You just see a bule house with many flowers and trees around it and that is mine .
【拼写错误】请检查bule,单词拼写或大小写有误.
7. There would be uncounted rooms in my house so that my friends could live in .
【高级表达】短语live in意为：住进，属于高中水平短语
8. Such as living room , study room , swimming room , kitchen and so - on , the things that every house would be have .
【动词错误】请检查be have,表达不规范/格式有误.
【教师点评】成分缺失错误，请检查Such as living room ...，缺少谓语或句式有误。
9. And the stage would be in the shade of s in the English words .
【教师点评】意义不明错误，请检查 in the shade of s in the English words表达不通顺。
10. On the other hand , this beautiful will would be a truth in one day .
【教师点评】介词错误，请检查in one day，介词使用有误
【高级表达】短语On the other hand意为：另一方面在于，属于四六级英语考试常见经典短语。
