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1. My dream house is not very big , but useful and comfortable On the first floor , there are kitchen , living room and bedroom .
【冠词、限定词错误】请检查room and bedroom,不通顺,请加限定词或修改表达.
【名词单复数错误】请检查are kitchen,使用不规范,建议修改单复数或修改表达.
2. On the second floor is my reading room, I have a silent place to read the books I like .
【高级表达】silent place用的不错
1. The rock consist on a room and ice covered it .
【主谓一致错误】请检查The rock consist,表达不规范/前后不通顺.
【教师点评】介词错误，请检查consist on 表达不规范，通常用consist of/in
2. In my room , there are some electronic machines I can work at there .
【介词错误】请检查at there,注意there/here是副词,前面通常不加介词
1. There can be a clear ream running by my house and what is at the end of the people's sights are green mountains .
【教师点评】句子-句式错误，请检查what is at the end of the people's sights are ...句型有误
2. On the first floor of the house , there's a living room , a kitchen with much delicious food in and a bedroom .
【教师点评】介词错误，请检查a kitchen with much delicious food in，介词in表达有误。
1. The house needn't be too big , as long as I can live comfortable .
【词性错误】请检查live comfortable,表达不通顺,请修改词性或修改表达.
2. One of the most important thing is that there must he a big yard so that I can plant all kinds of trees , flowers , vegetables , finut I want .
【名词单复数错误】请检查most important thing ,此处通常用复数名词
【拼写错误】请检查finut,单词拼写或大小写有误.
3. One more thing , I hope that my house is avoid the noisy city .
【动词错误】请检查is avoid,表达不规范/格式有误.
4. I like , quite and beautiful countryside more .
【冠词、限定词错误】请检查beautiful countryside,表达不规范,建议加冠词或修改用词.
【词性错误】请检查, quite and beautiful,并列连接词前后的词性应保持一致
