【合肥英语】英语作文分析报告3W

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1. My dream house is as big as a big supermarket .

【教师点评】其他错误，请检查as big as a big supermarket表达不规范。

2. I think it will be located on the side of the sea because it has a   beautiful scenery .

【冠词、限定词错误】请检查a beautiful scenery,a/many/these/number等词一般不接不可数名词.

3. My friend Tom talk to me about his dream house , but I think it is   worse than me because he don't notice the environment.

【主谓一致错误】请检查because he don't,表达不规范/前后不通顺.

【教师点评】其他错误，请检查 it is worse than me表达不规范/前后不一致。

4. My house will measure 200 qualt le .

【拼写错误】请检查qualt le,单词拼写或大小写有误.

5. I want to a boy free room to arrange my daily life .

【成分缺失错误】请检查want to a,通常用need/want sth或need/want sb to do sth.

6. I want a colorful house with bedroom , living room , kitchen , bathroom   , study room and computer room , they will make me relaxed .

【冠词、限定词错误】请检查computer room,请添加限定词或修改表达.

【名词单复数错误】请检查with bedroom,表达不规范,建议用复数或修改表达.

7. Not only the rooms , but also the fresh are both important for me .

【教师点评】主谓一致错误，请检查but also the fresh are，主谓不一致或缺少成分。成分缺失，请检查Not only the   rooms , but also the fresh，建议更换表达。

8. Now I want to this dream house immediately .

【成分缺失错误】请检查want to this,通常用need/want sth或need/want sb to do sth.

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1. The wave runs with wind - along with the sen brushes the beach .

【高级表达】短语along with意为：和...一道，和...一起，属于四级水平短语

2. I have never seen so strong view .

【冠词、限定词错误】请检查strong view,请添加限定词或修改表达.

3. There is a roof that is decorated with flowers and grass .

【高级表达】短语decorate with意为：以...装饰，属于四级水平短语

4. Four bedrooms that can contain my family .

【其它错误】请检查Four bedrooms that can contain ...,缺少逗号或主句缺少成分.

5. …a fire so   that we can get warm in winter .

【高级表达】短语so that，属于高中水平短语

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1. It's located in a quiet and fastinating countryside .

【拼写错误】请检查fastinating,单词拼写或大小写有误.

2. It's convenient for me to invite my friends to attend the party .

【高级表达】短语convenient for意为：便于...，属于四六级经典短语

3. It is decorated with lots of bright model stars .

【高级表达】短语decorate with意为：以...来装饰，属于高中水平短语

4. And there is a bathroom in each bedroom so that my friends can live my   house and take a shower comfortablely .

【拼写错误】请检查comfortablely,单词拼写或大小写有误.

5. The last floor , my family and I all live there .

【教师点评】句子-句式错误，请检查The last floor , my...句型有误.

6. And the most thing is to look out the views through the large window .

【教师点评】动词错误，请检查 look out   the views，使用不规范。注意不及物动词用法

7. It maybe make me to feel relaxed and have a good rest in it .

【动词错误】请检查make me to feel,通常用make sb do sth或make it to somewhere.

【主谓一致错误】请检查It maybe make,主谓不一致或缺少成分.